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The Void
(18-05-11)

And as the sun sets behind the sea,
No words shall be uttered,
No sound shall be heard,
Just the silence of it all...

Slowly eating away your soul
As you lose for the last time,
Both the way out
And sanity disappear...
Leaving you with a complete void.

This emptiness turning into
Your final asylum…
A place of restrain,
And  ultimate void,
Losing the final grip
To your once loved sanity.

Screaming into the utter void,
No sound is heard,
Fighting away this poison
Is just not an option.

Like a pit,
An endless fall,
Of confusion
And denial.

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Balel

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I was browsing through DA and I came across this image: [link]

And got some inspiration. So this poem came to life.... The void... the emptiness... and everything else....

Well hope you enjoy the poem :)

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~Avenvia Jun 16, 2011  Student Writer
It's nice that another deviant inspired you, and the way that the image partners with the poem makes the latter seem much less bleak. It almost gives it a sense of beautiful, tragic isolation instead of choking loneliness =)
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:icon007balel:
~007Balel Jun 17, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :D
I am glad you think so,
I was really inspired by the picture..
And that is what I wanted to convey through the poem :)
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:iconavenvia:
~Avenvia Jun 19, 2011  Student Writer
You're welcome =)
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:iconchryssalis:
Just wonderful.......:clap:
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:icon007balel:
Mood: Zest ~007Balel May 27, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :D
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:icondarlingangel0565:
Mood: Love =DarlingAngel0565 May 26, 2011  Professional Writer
You did a great job on this.
This piece goes with the picture perfectly.
Another amazing piece and I am truly impressed with it. :iconblackheartplz:
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:icon007balel:
~007Balel May 26, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks :D
Glad you like it :)
I enjoyed writing it.
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:icondarlingangel0565:
=DarlingAngel0565 May 26, 2011  Professional Writer
You are welcome,
And you knew I would like it,
For it feeds my non light side..;P
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:icon007balel:
~007Balel May 26, 2011  Student Writer
lol xD
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:icondarlingangel0565:
=DarlingAngel0565 May 26, 2011  Professional Writer
You know it is true :rofl:
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