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Bleed out your Betrayal

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Bleed out your Betrayal

by ~007Balel, Dec 10, 2010, 12:22:29 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Sweetheart, sweetheart, bleed out your Betrayal
(10-12-10)

Your body calmly laying on the bed,
When suddenly all the darkness takes over.
It's almost impossible to hold it in any longer,
I only see what you have become to me.

Your hands are the source of your betrayal,
Your eyes are the deep blue sea which attract me so..
Your lips are those which emit soft sweet lies.

So,
I tie these hands down to your lawful throne,
I pierce those eyes which drown me into the sea so deep,
I sew shut those lips which with a soft touch paralyze me so.

You wake to all the pain before you,
Cause no pain can be adhered forever.
You try to move, yet to not avail.

A smile suddenly erupts from my cold skin
As my hand produces a blade from my side pocket.
Which runs through your wrist with a soft gentle swift,
Creating a sweet flow of blood.

Now,
I stare at your pierced eyes,
While I kiss those lips drowned in soft lies.
Your eyes no longer mimic the deep blue sea,
And your kiss no longer paralyzes this broken soul.

I sit on the chair in front of you, grinning,
Watching you slowly loosing grip of reality,
As I utter to you the last verdict of justice:
"Sweetheart, sweetheart, bleed out your betrayal."

____________________________________________________________
Balel

Sweet Child

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Sweet Child

by ~007Balel, Mar 1, 2011, 12:30:59 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Sweet Child
(01-03-11)

O sweet child;
Tell us of your story,
A game that was
But not anymore.

_{Twas a tragic story;
Of darkness and light,
Happy memories disappear
Giving room for darkness.}

Tell us of the battles,
The infinite losses
And the few wins.

_{What do you know of the battles?
Those that shatter hopes,
Turning blissful dreams
Into nightmares.}

Show us a tragedy,
Of shattered hopes
And broken promises.

_{Twasn't just a tragedy,
A soul now lost.
The darkness had won,
For yet another time..}

O sweet child;
Reside a longing loss,
One which broke
And drove to your end.

_{What of the loss?
Twas a means to an end,
An escape from the darkness
And the demon within.}

Tell us of the blood,
That which poured
And escaped your pours.

_{Blood? Why focus on that?
You see the act before you,
A body, but slowly drifting
Off to a peaceful sleep.}

Help us see the darkness,
The never ending light
In your underground.

_{O loving father;
Forgive my sins,
My false attempt to survive,
My broken promises
And shattered dreams.
See not the tainted body,
But the purified soul;
The blood was a means
To purify this blemished soul,
A sacrifice I made
Willingly and knowingly.}

O sweet child;
Thy life was truly tragic,
A life lost forever,
No more souls to be saved
By your unwavering hands.
This shall be the end;
Casting your soul
In the depths of the sea,
Hoping to find
That longing peace within.

_______________________________________________
Balel

The Void

by ~007Balel, May 26, 2011, 12:23:36 PM
Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Free Verse

The Void
(18-05-11)

And as the sun sets behind the sea,
No words shall be uttered,
No sound shall be heard,
Just the silence of it all...

Slowly eating away your soul
As you lose for the last time,
Both the way out
And sanity disappear...
Leaving you with a complete void.

This emptiness turning into
Your final asylum…
A place of restrain,
And ultimate void,
Losing the final grip
To your once loved sanity.

Screaming into the utter void,
No sound is heard,
Fighting away this poison
Is just not an option.

Like a pit,
An endless fall,
Of confusion
And denial.

________________________________________________
Balel

My First And Final Smile

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RestoredRestored
(08-04-12)

Once adored,
People screaming your name
Making hearts quiver
With just a simple glimpse.

But now...
You lay, broken,
Locked away in the darkness
Absent from people's thoughts.

The hardship of passing years
Took its tone on you...
Laying, untouched for so long,
Longing to be moulded back
To your once adored glory.

And we, long have been waiting
To see that will flourish,
That skin once more refined
And never again to be forgotten.

But alas the day is soon amongst us....

Your hands and feet
Will once again shine,
Taking us to new feat.

Your flawlessly shaped curves
Will once again be restored,
To seRestored by ~007Balel

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Realm of Hopes and DreamsRealm of Hopes and Dreams
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I can't let myself feel...
Can't pretend to care,
To make myself listen
To unspoken words.

I can't let myself feel...
Cause the only thing it brings
Is nights of hopes and dreams,
An endless cat and mouse chase.

I can't let myself feel...
Cause the only thing it brings,
The only thing that matters...
Is ooh so far away.

I can't let myself feel...
Cause the only thing it brings,
The only thing that matters...
Is... just... pain.

Can't I let myself care
Cause all I feel
Is pain.

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BalelRealm of Hopes and Dreams by ~007Balel

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2013 and Features

Journal Entry: Thu Jan 3, 2013, 8:11 AM

Happy new year everyone!
May the new year bring you and all your dear ones joy and happiness.

Well, it has been quite sometime since my last journal. But just to let everyone know, I'm still active and pop on DA. I just have been pretty bust with university this past year or so... so yeah haven't managed to shake university's load off my back. Hope every one is doing ok and looking forward to catching up on my watcher's pieces cause I've missed reading your work.

Also, wanted to thank the person who gave me a premium membership for this month. Whoever you are, thanks!

Now, enough blabbing and some features!!
If some of you didn't know, there was a critique challenge at #SuperWritersHelp which featured some of my works for other writers/deviants to freely critique as they see fit.

--> "The boys' gift" was critiqued by:

The prose critique can be found at: [link] .

--> "Realm of Hopes and Dreams" & "Bleed Out Your Betrayal"
were critiqued by:

The poetry critiques can be found at: [link] & [link] respectively.

Some features from

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Some features from

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I really do encourage you to read the above pieces, and maybe if you like their style follow their pieces. The reason I am saying this is because each and everyone of them has a unique way of writing and I really enjoyed reading their pieces! And also wanted to personally congratulate you on the critiques you've given.

Well, that's all for today... hopefully it won't be too long for the next journal and I promise I'll try to keep it as concise as possible next time.

Balel

p.s. Hope you like the new journal skin, which by now I guess you've realized that I'm a dragon ball fan xD

This journal skin was coded/styled by =BlackySpyro

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Personal Quote: "Everything happens for a reason"

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The Dragon of a Thousand ScalesThe Dragon of a Thousand Scales
23-06-12

Many years ago, when her great-grandfather was still a young boy, a wicked fairy had sent him on a quest to find a dragon's lair. The dragon had stolen a magical chest from the fairy, or so the story goes, and the fairy wanted it back. Unbeknownst to her grandfather, the fairy was a con artist who only wanted to steal from the dragon. Thinking he was doing a good deed, her grandfather had journeyed through a thousand storms to reach the lair of the dragon. Stealthily he had snuck into the lair, where the dragon slept on a jewel-bedecked mound. Being an honest man, he had not wanted to take more than

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by `MagicalJoey

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Cheese.

i. Mom wasn't a peach, she was a rose.
Her spring long gone, the rose; her canker
Hidden in the dense and delicate folds of her
Petals and masked by so sweet a scent that
Muddled the brains with childish memories:
Of unheeded warnings, of fairy tales and
Of rotten beginnings and middles
Of a certain poor little boy and girl
Whose breadcrumb trail misled them
To a sweet prison with a rotten core.
Mom had a meeting later that night,
Candlelight dinner for two-
Deviled eggs hors de oeuvre and
Alimony papers signed
Over roast turkey for the main course.

ii. Dad looked on ahead and smiled the Method smile:
All natural and eyes crin

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The way you annoy people out of their skin,
The way you never have an answer for a question,
The way you're always busy somehow,
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The way I can't breathe when I'm alone,
wondering if you'll talk to me or not.
Wondering if you could ever care about me as much,
or how, I care about you.

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B)The way you say 'yes' when I sa

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Wooing Sleep

Wooing Sleep
3-02-11

Like a mouse, insomnia tip-toes through my brain,
In search of scraps of cheese and crumbs
On which to feed;
Memories moulding in corners long forgotten
Or emotions leaving a bread trail to my heart.

There are medicinal traps down to catch it,
But it cleverly bypasses them and leaves me
Zombie-eyed and drained.

Time never goes by as slowly
As when you are trying to woo Insomnia
Into bed with you.

And time never passes any faster
When it finally joins you,
Yet refuses to join with you.

Wooing Sleep

by `MagicalJoey

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~Emofingers May 5, 2013 Student Writer

I recently wrote a Poem Balel, I'd love it if you could give it a read. I think you'll love it. Its absolutely crazy! I don't know what I was thinking when i wrote it!

~007Balel May 7, 2013 Student Writer

going to check it out!

~Emofingers May 7, 2013 Student Writer

Yaay!

Let me know how it fares. I swear its completely nuts!

~007Balel May 7, 2013 Student Writer

ohh I know, but it's the nutty & weird poems that we like